Yes it is. But it seems someone is way too full of himself to realize that. [img]i/expressions/rolleye.gif[/img]

For now I've finished chapter 1 and I'd say it's fairly "near canon" as far as character personalities go. Then again, that isn't hard to do for a series like Destiny where half of the cast is as predictable as the taste of strawberry pie (which is good). Much like redemption described, this feels like "Destiny +1 character". I have a hard time getting used to the idea really, though sometimes this Adam fellow is included well. Other times, though, his appearances comes off as a bit stressed.

My main advice for you now, redemption (if I dare say it without getting called a dumbass), is to get rid of all the japanese words and elements. This is an english fic. I don't want to see random stuff like "nani", "kaihee", "hai" all over. While this is based on an anime, things like that actually just disrupt the reading and also serves to make it close to impossible to read for people who haven't seen anime before. Then again, the chance of a person like that reading anime fics is perhaps quite small to begin with. Well, that's what I think anyway. Now I'll get back to reading this. I might add some more comments once I finish it all.

Edit: You deserve a major compliment for managing to make the previews just as cheesy as the ones in the anime, by the way.