i laughed out loud when in the third one the Tori turns out to be really huge. Funny reference to the 'fatal battle' where Shinn 'killed' the person and they fell into the sea. The little 'friendship' thing was a little on the creepy side (as it was in the show...), but the text message from Dullindal was pretty funny.
And, of course, anything with hot sauce in it is excellent. I lol'd when Shinn started talking dirty. But god do I hate Kira and Lacus...