Words We Couldn't Say - This is reminiscent of Natsume Soseki's Sanshiro. The main character was totally perverted, I quite liked it. I could visualize the setting very well, and I felt as if I could tell what sort of person he was with his thoughts. The only problem is, this is a very novelesque way to write, instead of short story. With a short story, you have to bang out events a bit faster. It seems as if you didn't have enough time/space to write. Thus, I would try to condense the details a bit in order to move on with the plot. However I'm voting for it because I like it the best and I see the most potential for it.

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